Suzaku grabbed the girl and headed out of the tunnel. He then shunpo'd to a clear area and sat her down. "Are you ok?" He asked.
Yes, I am ok, thanks for saving me
Yes, I am ok, thanks for saving me
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-Isei noticed the girl and Suzaku leaving. He got very angry fast and roared towards their direction. It was a typical hollow screech, loud and frighting to most. Isei then looked at Ken not smiling anymore-
Now on top of me being hungry, I am angry as well! Die shinigami!
-Isei swung his right chain and ball at Ken horizontally at a high velocity-
Now on top of me being hungry, I am angry as well! Die shinigami!
-Isei swung his right chain and ball at Ken horizontally at a high velocity-
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-Ken grew frustrated with Isei still being able to attack because is he was able to attack then the girl and everyother soul in the area are in danger. He kept his eyes on Isei ignoring the ball and chain until the last second. Ken turned to his left and performed his Shikai on the spiked ball cutting it in half vertically-
I'm done with this fight hollow. You will not harm anyone anymore. This ends here.
-Ken started to build up his Reiatsu and put all of it into one attack-
Kaji Tora!
-A massive tiger made of burning bright blue fire appeared out of his zanpakuto Okibi. Ken sent it right towards Isei. He could not escape it and it burned the hollow to death-
OOC: POST 3///
I'm done with this fight hollow. You will not harm anyone anymore. This ends here.
-Ken started to build up his Reiatsu and put all of it into one attack-
Kaji Tora!
-A massive tiger made of burning bright blue fire appeared out of his zanpakuto Okibi. Ken sent it right towards Isei. He could not escape it and it burned the hollow to death-
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-Ken fell to his knees seeing as he used almost all of his Reiastu. He was breathing heavily but he was smiling-
~Brother...I saved her...~
~Brother...I saved her...~
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He placed the girl down. "I have to go" He said. He then used shunpo to where Ken was at. "I left the girl with my gigai" He then noticed Ken on the ground. "Ken, what happened?" he then released his spiritual pressure. It wasn't as strong as Kens but it was pretty strong. He then called Tempest. "Turn the tides, Tempest!" he went shikai. He then charged at the hollow full of anger. He pushed his claws together and created the Tempest Drill.
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"From... from now on... I will protect my brother in fathers stead."
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OOC: Um Suzaku I just killed him. It says so in my post. lol.
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OOC: Oh...I didn't see that part....sorry....ignore my post then. SO what do we do now? Should I take you to the squad with the girl?
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"From... from now on... I will protect my brother in fathers stead."
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Comments for Ken: Good job you kept me interested and the way you went about things also kept me in loop.
Grade: 85-ish
Comments for Suzaku: It was "Okay", I do have problems with you double posting. Also read the post above you before you charge right in. Cause that can also cause confusion. Your flow was a jagged and rough but you did pretty good over all. Also when in Shikai remember to kept the count in your post, it makes it easier for me to know. Also I do have a tiny problem with the way you saved the girl, I'm unaware whether Ken said to save the girl but you could have helped him.
Grade: 79-ish
To you both: Great sportsmanship and great plot.
Grade: 85-ish
Comments for Suzaku: It was "Okay", I do have problems with you double posting. Also read the post above you before you charge right in. Cause that can also cause confusion. Your flow was a jagged and rough but you did pretty good over all. Also when in Shikai remember to kept the count in your post, it makes it easier for me to know. Also I do have a tiny problem with the way you saved the girl, I'm unaware whether Ken said to save the girl but you could have helped him.
Grade: 79-ish
To you both: Great sportsmanship and great plot.
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OOC: Thanks I appreciate it. Although I am not satisfied with an 85. I'm going to try and peform my role playing better next time. Thanks a lot for the oppurtunity Taicho. :D ///
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